Haiku U
This is just a quick post to share some haiku that I’ve written. I’ve mentioned in the past that I use a website called oneword.com for one-minute writing prompts, but this same site has a little haiku challenge that I do occasionally, too, just for grins. Here are a few of the challenge words and my resulting poems:
FUSCHIA
Fussy in fuschia
She pouts into the mirror
Posing and preening
TSUNAMI
The ocean curls its
Fingers into a huge fist
And punches the land.
POSITIVE
And though you remain
Positively positive
I still smell your fear.
HIPSTER
Aging hipster with
Gangsta clothes and attitude
Only makes me smile
ENDLESS
This argument is
Like a mobius strip
An endless circle
KINDRED
“We are one,” you say;
“Kindred spirits, you and me.”
Then you lick your lips.
COUNT
Count on your fingers
The times you didn’t listen
No wonder she left
WALRUS
Somnolent walrus
Whiskered, weighty yet winsome
How’s your self-esteem?
EFFERVESCENT
Effervescent has
Four syllables, which makes it
Tough to write haiku
SHARE
The kiss was sweet but
Sometimes it’s not nice to share
When you’re infectious
GUT
Listen to your gut
They say. When I cock my ear
I hear rumbling
CATCH
“Catch me if you can,”
The boy jeered, and so I did.
He was delicious.
I like Tsunami the best, though there are quite a few good ones. I love the way good haiku suggests a scene or image or emotion without flatly spelling it out. On the subject of short writing, you should follow Arjun Basu on Twitter (@arjunbasu). He writes short stories in 140 characters; does several a day and they can be pretty entertaining.
Thanks for the lead on Basu – I will definitely follow. I love that stuff.
You are a woman of so many talents … these are delightful. Thank you for sharing!
Coming from you, Rich, that’s high praise indeed. Thank YOU!